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  • Summary: Lynne is a short story about the scariest thing in the world - being a teenager.
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  1. Jul 16, 2018
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    This is a really good creepypasta-like story.
    Lynn is a troubled 15 year old girl living with her pregnant sister Jas and their working class
    This is a really good creepypasta-like story.
    Lynn is a troubled 15 year old girl living with her pregnant sister Jas and their working class parents in London. Their father has high expectations for her.

    This is a story about stress induced mental disorders, self hatred and failure.
    It certainly is not suitable for every reader, but for those who like this kind of story it is a good two hour read that won't disappoint you.

    Story - 8/10
    Music - I can't decide. Is it a 2/10 or a 10/10? it's certainly weird, but it perfectly fits the story. So I'll go with a 10/10
    Sprites - sparse, but ok. 5/10
    Background art - run of the mill with some nice effects. 5/10
    This (weighting the story higher) makes it a solid 8/10
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